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                                                 Soul Note #1
                                         (In the perspective of Lex)

Sapphire, color of your eyes,
they mesmerize me,
into a daze of tranquility.
The fire, trying to consume my heart,
vanquished by your elegance and glory.
The breeze that passes, but not the soft kiss,
I recieved from you a gift of infinite gratitude.
A laugh, a hug, a kiss...
My strong beating heart yearns for your touch.
You are a sparkle,
turning my doubts into crystal beliefs.
As we embrace, you smile upon me,
showing your faith into my arms, and my power.

As you laugh,
I melt at your upbeat tone,
showing me you're happy and content.
Of course, I'm content with your everlasting charm.
I hold you tight,
making sure you are protected from harm,
though I know we have our times of turmoil,
we bond through it and you smile upon me again,
tenderly kissing my lips and soul,
rekindling the very reason,
the reason I loved you for so long.

My confinement is as well as hope,
to revitalize our passion over and over again,
never getting tired of even the simplest of things,
just glancing,
you smile and blush,
making me grin with confidence.
I am yours, and you are mine,
we never break our destiny bond as we entwine
Many times you admit your love,
as do I.
I will always be by your side,
as you have made me more powerful than I have ever imagined.
Your eyes tell me the emotion,
I want to see,
and we kiss again, not separating our fateful eternity.
Prevailing the truth was easy, but hearing you say it was much better.
As your love caresses me,
we continue the path of divine love.
©2008 ~Blue-Potion
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Ok, seriously, I'm not excited anymore. -_- I think after this one, then woo hoo for Valentines Day, now leave me alone XD I will probably do one in Pyra's view later. It all depends on who might want to see it. This version is in Lex's point of view, talking about his (spoiler) wife after about 20 years of marriage. Kinda vague on the details though, so you could just about say any time after he married her. Once again, completely inspired by this awesome writer, :icongamefreak38: with his awesome poem, [link] Get to reading it people! It's awesome! ^^ anyway, hope you enjoy this more detailed version

... Hmmm... also :/ what category would I put this under? Did I do the right one? I'm not at all familiar with poetry anymore. (evidence that I need to do more poetry again) Oh well, as long as it's ultimately in the poetry category, it shouldn't be too much of a problem right?
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*GameFreak38:iconGameFreak38: Feb 14, 2008, 1:49:07 PM
For now, the category is ok since you aren't really sure. A much better poem this time.:)

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No matter how bad things get, never give up and never surrender!
*LenOdonnel:iconLenOdonnel: Feb 14, 2008, 1:54:19 PM
Okay!! I admit, I'm impressed. XDDD
Nice work!!!

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"There's no place for emotion on the battlefield. Stay cool, follow orders, and eliminate the enemy. That’s all we have to do." -Gage, Advance Wars: DOR

:heart:~SarahViolin + :star:=Chibi-Gardevoir X craziness = END OF THE WORLD!!! XD
~Blue-Potion:iconBlue-Potion: Feb 14, 2008, 2:08:54 PM
I thought so, and uhh... O.O I made one of Pyra. That quickly, much different from the one of Lex, as you'll find out.

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I am only a mixture of the great elixirs
~Blue-Potion:iconBlue-Potion: Feb 14, 2008, 2:09:38 PM
XD you might be impressed with this one coming up. It's the 2nd Soul Note, in Pyra's view. >.> though it's a bit different.

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I am only a mixture of the great elixirs
*GameFreak38:iconGameFreak38: Feb 14, 2008, 2:09:41 PM
We'll see.

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No matter how bad things get, never give up and never surrender!
*LenOdonnel:iconLenOdonnel: Feb 14, 2008, 2:11:54 PM
Alright! Can't wait to see it!!

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"There's no place for emotion on the battlefield. Stay cool, follow orders, and eliminate the enemy. That’s all we have to do." -Gage, Advance Wars: DOR

:heart:~SarahViolin + :star:=Chibi-Gardevoir X craziness = END OF THE WORLD!!! XD
~Blue-Potion:iconBlue-Potion: Feb 14, 2008, 2:19:46 PM
you'll be surprised, trust me.

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I am only a mixture of the great elixirs
=dmdmal:icondmdmal: Feb 15, 2008, 1:22:44 PM
Put that on a card and sell it!
Some nice work thar! :star: x5

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I am one of many proud foxes, I am known as D. What makes me different? Is it my style? The way I talk? My potential? What is the reason to remember the name? A brown ninja-fox of lunar breed, with sword in hand, I hold my ground and push forward.
~Blue-Potion:iconBlue-Potion: Feb 15, 2008, 5:06:09 PM
wow thanks ^^ I'm glad you think so. I did try what I could.

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I am only a mixture of the great elixirs